My Diary in my English Project

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1-We Create Our Future My project is about grandma stories in 2080. Each group has to bring a story told by their grandparents. They have to translate it. it means that they have to rewrite it in English keeping the same ideas 2-The Reason why I'm Participating in this Project+What I'm Expecting to Learn I have chosen to work on this project because of two things.First of all, I want to improve my English.Second of all, this project will allow me to work with people from all over the world and therefore discover many cultures. I think that this project will make me learn many good things such as how to collaborate and work in a group (despite that I'm working alone in the first step) how to write articles, narratives etc...
3-What I've accomplished

_Introduced myself on Padlet
_Participated in the Icebreaking Activity on Twinspace _Recorded my Grandma Story _Post my story on Soundcloud _Created a Google Doc _Posted the link of my podcast on Soundcloud, google doc _Wrote a part of the translation in the Google Doc and asked other people's help _Created a blog on Blogger _Wrote my first article
_Finishing the translation of the story
_Did my video and published it on Youtube
_Shared my thoughts and chose the most impotant goal for me
_Repeat it because it was short and I didn't spoke about some things that were necessary to speak about
_The second record was refused by the professor, she informed me that my record had some mistakes but it was a great work
_Record my thoughts and send it to the teacher who told me that I had some mistakes in my pronunciation.So I did it another time and it was perfect, so I publish it on Flipgrid

Here's a picture of my text corrected by Miss Hayfa: